[leexiao20002000]

it's my Ref letter which wrote by myself, can someone check the grammar for me please, if any sentences are not so flowing, can you point out and then give some ideas. I'll be very appreciated.

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To Whom It May Concern:

This is to confirm that Miss Qian Sun has worked as a full-time Sales Manager in the SEN Chinese Medicine Company since Oct 2006. Her Marketing roles are including selling medical products, promoting treatments therapies and translating for practitioners to help clients get tranditional Chinese Medicine knowledge.

I was deeply and consistently impressed with both Miss Sun's passion towards her work and outstanding working ability. She is a take-charge person who is able to present creative ideas. She has successfully developed several marketing plans for our company that has resulted in increased revenue.

Miss Sun played the role of a good.team leader.She always would like to know the stuff's advice and is adept at inspiring and motivating other employees. By regularly organizing team meeting for communicating working experiences,she improved the working efficiency and work cooperation. Miss Sun is highly respected by the people who work under her supervision. I am so delighted and appreciated to see that the atmasphere of her working place is always positive and harmonious.

Her interpersonal and communication skills have allowed her to develop productive working relationships with our clients. She always could be able to satisfiedly solve any kinds of customers complaints and handle customers enquiries with a good manner .

Miss Qian Sun has done an excellent job and I truly believe she has strong learning capability and enthusism in any field,I would highly recommend her for a position in your organization. Please let me know if you need anymore information

Sincerely yours,

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Cheers

[Bluey]

The convention of references is that your employer writes them!

[castlelgr]

[Bluey]

promoting treatments therapies = promoting treatment, therapies or promoting treatment therapies?

She always would like to know the staff's advice = she is open to advice given by her staff?

organizing = organising

appreciated to see that the atmasphere of her working place = appreciated seeing that the atmosphere of the work place?

develope = develop

enthusism = enthusiasm

Sincerely yours = Yours faithfully (unless you know their name and it is 'Yours sincerely'

[montyzuma]

i would also add a bit about not being afriad to lie and cheat to get on. that always impresses them.

something like

I will trample anything in my path to get my way

and

sexual favors are distributed freely

will go down well with any prospective employer

[leexiao20002000]

thank you very much for your kindly help, and as you said it is a bit blatant, but yet you don't do so, how can next employer find you exclusive